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Holding OnHolding on

Cold arms of fire are wrapped around me
Sprit born in pain still talks to me
Innocent cries of love heard from darkness
Happiness seems to play hide and seek with me

Still holding on to the disputed life
How I live to contradict those vibes
The more I control it, the more I loose it
Dying every day with infinite lives

by:Aamir Shah (AaSH)1998

Sleep Becomes Confession

Sleep Becomes Confession

Darkness unravels the loneliness around me
I close my eyes and fall apart
Memories of disregarded option
I feel you dieing in my heart

The breeze scents like my childhood
Smelling the toxic past
The crowed words I shouted
The harmony that did not last

My silence reflects my sins
My tears bleed my deeds
The blaze that roared once upon
Has cultivated hell feeds

This journey comforts me now
This dream confesses my sins
The age that is not gracious anymore
Death mindful within

I rest not in silence
Chased by my agony, my aggression
I awake by the cleansing ritual
My sleep Becomes Confession

by:Aamir S

Lies that I wishLies that I wish

Bitter emotions of disbelief
Biting truth and grief
The lexis that you utter
Still a fool to believe

Baffling lays in doubt
Dreams before you to shout
Intoxication by your presence
Your laughter not so loud

Walked again round in circles
By your impaction visionary finger
Like a zombie I counter on promises
Lies that I wish to linger

by:Aamir Shah (AaSH)2000

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Walked Away Againby ~aash

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I walked away (Again)

Today I walked away
Taking memories with me
Leaving moments behind
Making your destiny free

Call me anything you want
But you will thank me one day
You will realize the truth
You will know I had no other way

I saw you today and bled again
My heart was lost on those paths again
Its not been that long
The truth is that we don’t belong

I wanted to but could not say anything

And I walked again
Thinking once again
Even I had complications
Even I had hurt again

To love you forever
Is all I wished for
There is darkness in all directions now
No more the seasons that I waited for

I know you hurt too
I know you still flip through my letters
We don’t belong together
The fate, yes it matters

I wish I could turn back time.
I wish I could buy more breaths
I wish to only sleep with memories
Cause before you, my destiny fades

I wanted to but could not say anything

And I walked again
Thinking once again
Even I had complications
Even I had hurt again

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~sufined Apr 9, 2007 Professional General Artist

anth ....
tight man i love this one...

~spinelessublime Aug 30, 2004

yeah I think you should decrease the intensity of the text and if it were hand-written - even better.

But I love it I love it!

~morback Jul 13, 2003

very very nice...tell me, is it a polaroid lift? Kinda looks like it. Else yes, I think adding the text would do it well, but in a faded-out way. And handwritten. If it's a lift, try writing the lyrics with pencil on the papar and lift the image on it. The text would be almost invisible, and only those who take a close look would read. The worthy ones. Or, it will create a little texture that would invite the viewer to take a closer look.

:) (Smile)

~alienari Jul 11, 2003

Very emotional piece. Love the composition and I'm all for adding text into artwork. Makes it more personal, in my humble opinion. Good job, keep it going!

~kenx Jul 11, 2003

WOW

great piece
and words
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