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Lies that I wish

Bitter emotions of disbelief
Biting truth and grief
The lexis that you utter
Still a fool to believe

Baffling lays in doubt
Dreams before you to shout
Intoxication by your presence
Your laughter not so loud

Walked again round in circles
By your impaction visionary finger
Like a zombie I counter on promises
Lies that I wish to linger

by:Aamir Shah (AaSH)2000
:iconaash:
Lies that I wish
Something you fall for Lies knowingly
:iconrcybergeek:
In the first and second stanza the rhyme is lines 1,2,4 but in the last it is only lines 2 and 4. The poem is good, although short, but the ryhme pattern is a bit rough.
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